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The story is still unfinished, Marti is telling me this story [She dictate the story to me before writing and publish it] and you're right, it's very cool and funny! In every scene happen something unexpected and the Axel character is hilarious, I'll draw him one of those days!
Thanks a lot again for the compliments, I really apreciated
I'm lucky because Marti (
[So I get all the prewiew of her stories before that she publish them!]
This story is really complex by now, even if we are still at the beginning a lot of things happened!
From now Riku and Axel go in America, joining the group of soldier [wich captain is Saix] that is going to help in the expedition inland.
A lot of stuff happen, Riku shine above the rest and get promoted. With a little group of other soldier under his guide, controlled strictly by Xigbar (his superior, that proposed him for the promotion) they go in reconnaissance to reach and old fort inland. They get attacked by a group of indians. To pass unnoticed they decide to send only one man to search for help at the fort that they're searching. Riku run away with a horse alone when they're battling again and he was on the right way...but he accidentally pass near and old abandoned mine that fall under his feet and he remain stucked in this big hole for days because he've lost the map and he can't get out his horse. While he was exploring the nearest river he discover a group of indians and one of them (Sora) have stole from him his diary and his silver clock (a really important gift form his father, who's dead). He try to chase him but he lost him, only to find out that he was in the mine hole, healing his horse's leg. Then Riku capture him and take back the clock and here we are...the story stopped here even for me xD